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6月英语四级作文解析及范文,英语四级六级作文

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  (作者:王江涛)2015年6月的大学英语四级、六级考试已全部结束,下面对三篇作文逐一进行了解析并提供了参考范文,供广大考生参考。

  作者:王江涛 2015年6月的大学英语四级、六级考试已全部结束,下面对四级作文的真题命题规律进行解析的同时,对作文逐一进行了解析并提供了参考范文,供广大考生参考。

  再过两天就是2013年12月英语四六级考试了,对于作文这一块,无论考何种形式作文,最简易的处理方式是:有汉语提纲则按照汉语提纲写相应的功能段落,若无汉语提纲则按照话题和内容要求直接写相应的功能表达或自己列出基本提纲再写相应功能表达!图表和图画、书信亦可如此!

  Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay based on the picture below. You should start you essay with a brief description of the picture and then comment on this kind of modern life. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words。

  Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay based on the picture below. You should start you essay with a brief description of the picture and then comment on parents’ role in their children’s growth. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 150 words。

  图画、话语评论和图表作文可按照相同模式来处理:首段引出话语,图画和图表,并对其内容描述评论;二段写对应现象、意义或危害,尾段写看法和建议并展望!背诵功能表达组合完成作文。

图片 12015年6月四级作文解析及范文:网络生活

图片 2作文

  近年四六级跑题率很高,审题是关键,建议关注1 体裁+话题;2内容要求:英文提示/汉语提纲;3字数。如13年6月六级“Earth provides enough to satisfy every man’s need, but not every man’s greed。” 应关注四类词:名动形副,如earth, satisfy, man, greed等,对应写现象、意义、建议或危害。以下是指导范文,希望广大考生认真学习参考。

  命题解析

  命题解析

  话题1:老年人孤独生活

  本题要求首先简要描述图画,然后评论这种现代生活。图画显示:现代人无论工作、居家、娱乐还是睡眠,都与电脑密不可分。显而易见,本题主旨为电脑或网络对现代生活的影响。

  本题要求首先描述图画,然后评论家长[微博]在其孩子成长中的作用。图中显示:一位女儿兴高采烈地告诉母亲:“妈妈,好消息!我被您选择的大学录取了。”显而易见,本题的主旨是:父母为子女做出了太多的决定,造成子女缺乏独立。

  Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay. You should start your essay with a brief description of the picture and then express your views on the lonely life of aged people. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.

  国内写作考试中已经反复考察电脑或网络这一热点话题。2002年6月四级写作考察“大学生使用电脑情况”,2009年考研[微博]写作考察“网络的‘近’与‘远’”,2012年6月六级写作考察“网络对人际共同的影响”,2013年12月四级写作考察“网络对人们沟通方式的影响”。2015年6月,四级写作再次考察电脑或网络这一话题。如果考生研究过之前的写作真题,诸多表达均可使用。

  关于两代关系这一话题,国内写作考试已经多次考察。2003年考研[微博]写作考察图画作文“温室花朵经不起风雨”,即父母溺爱造成子女缺乏独立。2010年12月,四级写作考察“父母如何让孩子独立”。如果之前研究过以上真题,本题易如反掌。

图片 3老年人孤独生活

  写作思路:

  写作思路:

  Given is a simple but thought-provoking cartoon: an aged grandma sits in front of mirror, looking at “herself” in the mirror and saying to herself, “I feel rather lonely when my son goes to work and my grandson studies in school.”

  1、本题首段应简要描述图画,指出人们无论工作、家庭、休闲或休息,都与电脑关系密切。

  1、本文首段应简要描述图画,指出有些父母过于包办造成子女缺乏独立。

  首句功能为:引出图画;之后为图画内容描述,主要是四要素:人/物、动作、文字和环境,写出四要素中的两三点即可。

  2、次段最好进行正反论证,说明电脑有利有弊:一方面可以满足工作生活的需要并娱乐自我,另一方面过度沉迷也会浪费大量的时间和精力。

  2、次段写法比较灵活,可以具体分析父母过于包办的原因,也可以进行举例论证。

  Obviously, this cartoon can be naturally associated with the significance of children’s accompany for aged parents: if elderly people intend to enjoy happiness, it is advisable for their children to spend more time in parents. In contemporary society, it has become a trend for young people to be busy with their work and study. Meanwhile, an increasing number of youngsters find it difficult to have spare time to accompany lonely parents. However, it is adult children’s accompany that enables aged parents to build up adequate hope, love and enthusiasm for life. As a matter of fact, young people in large numbers have not come to realize the loneliness of aged people.

  3、第三段最好提出建议措施:我们应该扬长避短,在合理使用电脑的同时,避免过度沉迷。

  3、尾段最好提出建议措施,呼吁父母放手给孩子自由,而子女应努力寻求独立。

  二段首句:图画联系主题;之后if句为图画简单评论;in contemporary society一句为图画所暗含的社会现象;meanwhile一句为相关人+具体感受;however之后为强调句式,论述意义;尾句是万能总结。

  参考范文:

  参考范文:

  As a youngster, I am convinced that it is of great necessity for us to accompany aged parents, no matter how busy we are. Accordingly, we should educate, advocate and encourage our friends, classmates and acquaintances tolove, respect and care all elderly people. (196 words)

  As is symbolically illustrate in the cartoon, a person is always staying in front of a computer no matter whether he or she is working, studying or playing. Even when he is sleeping, the image of surfing on line is also indispensable in his sweet dreams。

  The drawing vividly reflects a daughter is chatting with her mother in their house. The eyes sparkling with delight, the daughter tells her mother, “Good news mom! I was accepted to the college of your choice。” Obviously, the implication of the portrayal is that the daughter is lack of independence due to her mother’s doting care。

  尾段首句:观点;二句建议;尾句展望未来。

  The metaphorical and impressive portrayal has subtly revealed the duality of the relationship between man and computer. On the one hand, there is no denying that the computer is currently one of the most efficient tools either to entertain oneself or to meet the work's needs. But on the other hand, a good many people admit that they are too much addicted to computers to maintain face-to-face contact with their friends and colleagues. Once indulged in the fictitious world, people feel reluctant to approach others and to concentrate on real life。

  The lovely daughter is naturally associated with the only children in our current society; the college of the mother’s choice epitomizes parents’ doting care and abundant material supplies that can shield the children from the harsh reality. Once the young people begin to seek independence and accept challenges from the real world, they are found too spoiled to be strong enough in the face of difficulties。

  话题2:网络谣言

  Hence, it is necessary for us to use computers in a reasonable way and restrain from overindulgence. After all, the computer is invented to connect you and me, and to bring conveniences to our life rather than set a barrier to keep people beyond reach。

  Accordingly, it is vital for us to derive positive implications from the thought-provoking drawing. On the one hand, we can frequently use it to enlighten the youth to be more independent in life. On the other hand, parents should be sensible enough to give their children more freedom to deal with troubles and problems。

  Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay by commenting on the remark “It is unbelievable for people to believe what they should not believe: Internet rumors。” You can cite some examples to illustrate your point. You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.

  如图所示,一个人无论工作、在家或娱乐,总是坐在一台电脑前面。甚至当他睡觉的时候,在他甜美的梦中,网上冲浪的画面也是必不可少的。

  这幅漫画生动地揭示了一个女儿正在家中和她的母亲聊天。眼中兴奋地闪着光芒,女儿告诉母亲:“妈妈,好消息!我被您选择的那所大学录取了。”显而易见,这幅漫画的含义就是由于母亲的溺爱,女儿缺乏独立。

  Given is a simple but thought-provoking remark: “it is unbelievable for people to believe what they should not believe: Internet rumors。” Obviously, this saying can be naturally associated with the seriousness of rumors: if we intend to have a positive Internet environment, it is advisable to eliminate/refuse rumors. (51)

  这幅比喻并使人印象深刻的图画象征性揭示了人与电脑之间的双重关系。一方面,不可否认电脑目前是用于娱乐自我和满足工作需要的最高效媒介之一。但另一方面,很多人承认他们太沉迷于电脑而不愿与朋友和同事保持面对面接触。一旦沉迷于这种虚幻世界,人们不愿接近他人并关注现实生活。

  这个女儿自然和当代社会的独生子女联系起来;母亲选择的大学就是保护孩子免于严峻现实的父母溺爱和优越物质条件的缩影。一旦年轻人开始寻求独立并且接受来自现实世界的挑战,人们发现他们已经被惯坏了,在困难面前无法足够坚强。

  In contemporary society, it has become a trend for individuals to surf the Internet for the information they need. Meanwhile, an increasing number of people find it rather difficult to distinguish the true news from rumors. Searching the Internet, we can notice a great many examples like this: false news, ads and pictures. (危害) Then, it is these rumors that lead the public to be cheated, confused and even panic. As a matter of fact, experts in large numbers have come to realize the importance of Internet honesty.

  因此,我们很有必要以一种合理的方式使用电脑,避免过度沉迷。毕竟,人们发明电脑是为了连接你和我,为我们的生活带来方便,而非设置障碍使人彼此疏远。

  总之,我们很有必要从这幅发人深思的图画中得出积极的含义。一方面,我们可以经常利用它来启发年轻人在生活中更加独立。另一方面,父母们应该充满理智给孩子们更多自由来处理困难和问题。

  As a regular Internet surfer, I am convinced that it is of great necessity for government to punish rumor makers. Accordingly, we should educate, advocate and encourage our friends, classmates and acquaintances to refuse making and spreading rumors. Sparing no efforts to do so, we will witness a hopeful and promising future of Internet life.

  话题3:延迟退休

  Directions:For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Should Retirement Age Be Postponed? You’d write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words. Your writing should be based on the following outline.

  1. 近年来,推迟退休年龄引发人们热议

  2. 推迟退休年龄有利也有弊

  3. 我的看法

  Based on a recent survey on the Internet, a majority of individuals admit that aging society will bring a variety of problems to their life. Along with the trend of longevity, it has become a trend for people to debate whether it is wise to postpone retirement age.

  A number of individuals favor postponing the retirement age. In their eyes, it is this policy that enables the aging society to build up enough work-force. As a matter of fact, people in mounting numbers have come to realize this problem in an aging society. Even so, others hold a different view that postponing retirement age carries some risks. This policy can bring old people stress, but cannot arouse their enthusiasm for work, and cannot help them to enjoy their retirement pension.

  I am convinced that we should take into account the wishes of old people. If those seniors have enthusiasm for work, we should educate, advocate and encourage them to work and perform their tasks; if not, it is advisable for the society to create a comfortable twilight for them. If we try our utmost to do so, the future of old people’ life will be promising and hopeful. (187 words)

  话题4:教育回报

  For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Education Pays based on the statistics provided in the chart below (Weekly earnings in 2010). Please give a brief description of the chart first and then make comments on it. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.

图片 4教育回报

  Given is a simple but enlightening chart by US Bureau of Labor: (图表描述万能) in2010,it had become a trend for doctors, masters and bachelors to earn more money in a week in US--- $1551, $1272 and $1038. Meanwhile, we can notice that weekly earnings of college graduates with no degrees, those with high school diploma and people with less than high school diploma were $712, $626 and $444 respectively.

  (注:图表描述没有必要面面俱到,写出大体趋势即可。)

  Obviously, this chart can be naturally associated with the importance of education: if individuals intend to acquire/ gain/ get better earnings, it is advisable for them to gain higher degrees. In contemporary America, it has become a trend for a host of companies/firms/corporations/ organizations to hire doctors and masters and pay them better salaries. It is education that enables them to build up adequate knowledge, skills and ability to deal with important tasks. As a matter of fact, employees and employers in large numbers have come to realize the significance of higher degrees.

  As a college student, I am convinced that it is of great necessity for youngsters to enhance ourselves by studying hard and getting better degrees. Do bear in mind: education is a worthy investment.

  最后,祝各位考生顺利通过四六级考试!

 

 

 

  话题1:老年人孤独生活

  Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay. You should start your essay with a brief description of the picture and then express your views on the lonely life of aged people. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words。

 

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