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2013年6月六级作文范文标准版【www.0805.com】,20

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  2013年6月大学英语六级考试已结束,本次考试为多题多卷,新浪教育[微博]频道第一时间收集整理不同版本试题,供考生参考,以下为英语六级作文范文。

  2013年上半年的六级考试已结束,以下是对六级写作的思路指导及范文,希望即将参加英语六级考试的同学能以此为借鉴,运用到自己的写作当中,举一反三。

  四六级作文主要涉及两大方面:一是与学生学习、生活相关的话题;二是社会热点,对于写作主题同学肯定都是熟悉,有话可说的,那么周六要上战场了,在这最后时刻一定要做什么呢?针对四六级作文的命题方式,学习万能模板,真实演练,使万能模板转化为个性化模板,冲击作文高分。

  2013年6月英语六级作文标准版

  Directions: For this part, you areallowed 30 minutes to write an essay commenting on the remark “Goodhabits result from resisting temptation”. You may cite someexamples support you view. You should write at least 150 words but no more than200 words。

  四级作文命题趋势是图画作文,六级是引言式(名人名言),依然可以采用经典三段论。

  Say No to Temptation

  难度:

  四级

  We are living in a world full of temptations. Due to lack of experience and determined will, many people cannot discriminate right from wrong and make bad decisions. For example, some students wallow in internet and lose themselves. Finally, they abandon their studies and ruin their future. Such things are horrible。

  谚语本身的难度大于上一个题目,resist和temptation两个词对部分学生有一定难度,但其实都是四六级词汇啊!!

  第一段:开门见山,简要描述漫画内容,指出寓意。

  As the saying goes, good habits result from resisting temptation. For us college students, it is particularly important to say no to temptation and form good habits. To achieve this, firstly, distinguish between right and wrong. Stay away from adverse temptations such as smoking and playing computer games. Secondly, it is necessary to have a long-term program, in other words, a dream. Once we have a dream, we will be conscious that our time is precious. Then we could have a strong will to say no to temptations and focus on meaningful issues. At last, in face of temptations, encourage yourself and refuse self-indulgence. Awards can be given yourself if you successfully resist a temptation. Meanwhile, good habits are formed in this process。

  思路:

  According to / In / From the cartoon / picture / drawing, (we clearly see that) 图画内容. Actually, what's behind the cartoon is the fact that / Obviously, what the cartoon symbolically illustrates / The cartoon reveals that 图画折射的现象或热点话题。

  Only by resisting adverse temptations and developing good habits can we achieve happiness and success. Otherwise, we would pay a heavy price。

  第一段:开篇引用+深意(这里直接写深意就可以了:生活中充满了各种诱惑,抵御诱惑才能养成好习惯或者我们应该学会抵御诱惑)

  第二段:表达对图画寓意的看法(2-3方面论述观点+事例论证)

  第二段:正能量(抵御诱惑的益处,比如:让我们能专心致志去做更有意义的事情等)+举例(必须要举例!题目要求了。)

  该段是中心段,特别要注重摆事实、讲道理,可分为两种展开形式:观点总结型;原因解释型。

  第三段:再次强调抵御诱惑对于培养好习惯很重要+我们自己具体应该怎么做

  1. 观点总结型

  范文:

  Many examples can be found to prove that 图画寓意或观点. A case in point is that 例子①. // The example of 例子① is a typical one. 进一步阐释该例子. In addition / For another example, 例子②。

  Good habits,so the proverb has it, result from resisting temptation. Or, to put it anotherway, in a dazzling world of myriad temptations,onecan foster good habits only if his excessive desire is controlled and thetemptation is resisted。

  2. 原因解释型

  It is easy forthose who fail to resist temptation to go astray or get into bad habits underthe influence of evil companies. A recent survey reveals that teens smoke, takedrugs, and ride with drunk drivers not because they haven't thought about therisks, but because they are tempted by their peers to try new things. By contrast,those who succeed in resisting temptation can always devote themselves to moremeaningful things. Take college students for example. Only if we resist thetemptation of playing computer games or other meaningless entertainments can weform such good habits as reading, keeping good hours, to name just a few。

  In fact, 重申图画寓意或观点. The following reasons can account for 上述现象. First of all / To begin with, 原因①. What's more / Moreover, 原因②. In addition / Besides, 原因③。

  In short, infostering good habits, nothing can be more important than resisting temptation.Hence, it is essential that schools,educatorsand parents combine efforts to cultivate young people’s ability of tellingright from wrong as well as guide them in fostering correct views on life andvalues. Only in this way can good habits be formed。

  第三段:升华图画寓意的现实意义,或提出建议。

  (长沙新东方 高杰)

  To sum up / From my point of view / As for me, 个人意见或看法. 归纳提炼第二段的观点. Therefor / All in all / Only in this way, 总结句。

 

  六级

 

  第一段:总结引言所要阐述的道理

  As the proverb / remark puts it, / As is known to all, / It is generally accepted that 论点 / 主题. (It tells / reminds us) 进一步解释引言或观点. ① However, 违背观点的做法. Therefore it is a necessity to 坚持观点. // ② The truth of it is self-evident. (①和②选其一)

  第二段:摆出事实论据对其进行论证

  1. Many remarkable reasons contribute to / There are many facts supporting this proverb / 论点转述. First of all / To begin with / Most importantly, 论据①. What's more / Moreover / Furthermore, 论据②. In addition / Besides, 论据③. So, 总述。

  2. 论点的主题can be beneficial to 对象 in several / many aspects. First of all / To begin with / Most importantly, 好处①. For example, 进一步说明好处①. What's more / Moreover / Furthermore / In addition, 好处②。

  3. 如果在第一段采用了句式①,中心段还可以运用以下展开方式:

  The following example can fully illustrate the negative influence brought by 不坚持观点的做法. // Let's take 例子 as an example. If 不坚持观点, 将会产生的影响. Moreover, 该观点的作用①. Besides, 作用②. Therefore, it is important for 对象 to 坚持观点。

  第三段:表明自身立场或看法

  Judging from the evidence offered, we might safely draw the conclusion that 观点. (What is worth noting is) 进一步阐释观点. Therefore we should / it is of the utmost significance to 正确的态度或做法。

  以2013年6月的六级作文为例:

  Good Habits Result From Resisting Temptation

  As is known to all, good habits are essential to success. And the obstacle to forming good habits is various temptations. However, many people find themselves trapped in a world full of temptations, and thus fall into lots of bad habits. Therefore it is a necessity to resist temptations。

  The following example can fully illustrate the negative influence brought by bad habits. If adolescents spend so much time on time- and health-consuming activities, such as playing computer games, they will not form the good habit of concentrating on books, the poor academic performance becoming obvious. Moreover the habit of having regular physical exercise without sitting all day long before the computer benefits health. Besides, if they can resist the temptation of junk food, there will be no need for them to worry about their health and body shape. Therefore, it is important for adolescents to adopt viable ways to resist temptations。

  Judging from the evidence offered above, we might safely draw the conclusion that the ability to resist temptations does help us form good habits, which pave the way to success. So we should stand firm against various lures to form good habits。

  学习了万能模板之后,同学们不是死记硬背,而是拿真题操练,使之转化成为自己的模板,这样上考场写作文时才能游刃有余,教研君期待你来晒分~

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