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  来源:文都教育

一、基础(适合学渣)

  本文选自建昆老师的博客,点击此处查看原文

  The picture shows us a dialogue between a father and a son. The son told his father, “Dad, I’m a bit worried about disposing of nuclear waste”. While his father told him, “If you can empty the dustbin here you can do anything”. It reveals the importance of doing small things well before undertaking something big. There is also an old Chinese saying to go with this that a person can’t sweep the world before he can sweep his own room.

  第一部分:考试分析

第一段:陈述现状段
  1. There is a heated discussion whether…
  2. Does anyone hold the same attitude towards this issue ?Definitely not,actually,opinions vary from person to person.

www.0805.com 12013年6月英语四级作文图

  I agree on the point that it is of great importance for a person to do small things well before undertaking something big. First of all, doing small things well entail the qualities that needed in doing great things such as patience and ability of controlling time. For example, when we sweep our room, we need to manage our time and energy reasonably. Accordingly, if we sweep a bigger room, for example, a classroom with our classmates, we should learn how to cooperate and allot assignments as well. And a big advantage is that we can draw useful lessons from the failure of performing well because they didn’t cost a lot.

  一:形式

第二段:正反论证段
  1. Some maintain that ( 正方观点 ), firstly,(理由之一)
  2. Secondly, (理由之二)
  3. However,quite a few people hold the opposite opinion that (反方观点),
    for one thing,(理由之一)
  4. For another, (理由之二)

  对白:

  In another word, though these things seem trivial, they reinforce our manipulative ability and thus our understanding to the world. Therefore, we should not ignore the small things.

  有图片,图片要点为:一对父子就一个问题展开讨论;

第三段:个人观点段
  1. To my way of thinking,(个人观点). In the first place,(理由之一)
  2. Additionally,(理由之二)
  3. Given all the factors I have outlined,I strongly commit to the notion that ( 重申个人观点)

补充:对立观点作文,观点陈述应该如何不落俗套地表述:
(1)某物是有好处的:something is beneficial to sth.
(2)某物是有坏处测:something is detrimental to sth.
(3)某物优点>缺点: The merits of sth. far outweigh its demerits.
www.0805.com,(4) A优点>B优点: The merits of A are much greater than those of B.

  子:Dad, I'm a bit worried about disposing of nuclear waste(处理核废料)

 

  2,英文提示:a 简要描述图片;b 给出有关于主题“the importance of doing small things before undertaking something big”的观点

二、问题解决作文 {3段9句话}

  父:If you can empty the dustbin(垃圾筒) here, you can do anything

  写作应对

第一段:陈述现状
  1. The past several years have witnessed a not uncommon phenomenon that ( 社会现象 ).
  2. Taking a look around,one can find examples with ease: (举实例映证社会现象)

  北京新东方学校 金凌虹

  简要描述图片:

第二段:分析问题(原因危害)
  1. Ample reasons can account for this phenomenon,and the followings might be the most critical
    ones: firstly,(原因之一)
  2. Secondly, (原因之二)
  3. The problem mentioned above will bound to generate severe consequences if we keep turning a blind eye and deaf ear to it. On the one hand, (危害之一)
  4. On the other hand,(危害之二)

  We can see from the illustration there is a father talking to his son.  Having heard his son’s words “Dad, I am a bit worried about disposing of nuclear weapons”, the father replies, “If you can empty the dustbin here, you can do anything”, pointing the garbage can beside him。

  简要描述,即,描述图中主题,并引出相关的主题即可,故可以结合考研[微博]春季基础班讲义,使用描述句式如下:

第三段: 解决问题
  1. Effective measures should be adopted before things get worse. First and foremost,(措施一).
  2. Moreover,(措施二)
  3. Only with these measures taken can we (美好愿景)

补充1:都可以采取哪些解决措施?
(1)扬善去恶:What we should do is to encourage the merits and diminish the demerits to the least extent.
(2)加强教育:A public education campaign should be launched to make people have a good knowledge of …(很好地理解)
(3)政府出台:It is essential that the authorities should work out and implement relevant laws and regulations to put an end to this trend.
(4)呼吁政府:We should appeal to the government to work out rigid laws to punish various illegal conducts that are potentially detrimental to the environment.
(5)大家联合起来:It is high time that parents,educators,and the authorities make combined efforts to put an end to this situation.
(6)个人意识:The public should enhance their consciousness of the significance of …
(7)采取行动:We must press forward on deeper research, but research alone is inadequate, actually,any one of us has good reason to take actions to…

补充2:美好愿景做结尾
(1)From what has been discussed above, we can draw the conclusion that
(2)只有采取措施,我们才能:Only with these measures adopted can we …
(3)我坚信生活美好:It is deeply-rooted in my mind that a happy and bright future is awaiting us if we make every effort to
(4)和谐社会人人追求:It is deeply-rooted in my mind that the world will be a more harmonious place for us to live in.

  Funny and common as the conversation sounds, it reflects that the father intends to advise his son to do small things before undertaking the big. Unquestionably, doing small things is the first step of success and will lay root for doing something big. By doing something small, we are enabled to accumulate experience, master skills and train ourselves to be more patient. In other word, we can be well prepared for further challenges in the course of fulfilling small things. By contrast, those who set out to do something big will be constantly haunted by disappointment, frustrations or even failures. As when opportunity “something big” appears, they can hardly seize them because of the lack of experience and confidence stems from doing small things. Taking the picture presented above as a case in point, how can the little boy succeed in disposing of nuclear weapons if he even doesn’t know how to empty the dustbin?

  A:简单型

  From my perspective, under no circumstances should we undervalue the power of doing small things. Instead, we should regard small things as the source of experience, skills and the prerequisite of success. “Great achievement only belongs to those who can do small things perfectly。” Aristotle once said。

  As we can see from the picture,there are two persons, debating about the importance of doing small things before undertaking something big, who are a father and his son。

  北京新东方学校 赵子凌

  B:复杂型

  What the author illustrates in the picture reflects a hot topic which causedour concern: the importance of doing small thingsbefore undertaking something big. It is true that we are likely to overcomesome obstacles if we are proceeding forward to achieve success. However,this is the quality that many people lack in。

  As is vividly depicted in the picture, two men ,who are a father and his son,are talking about what should be done firstly,the small thing or the big ones.Simple as it is, what the picture conveys to us is thought-provoking。

  Asthe father in the picture says, those who can empty the dustbin in the roomfirst can tackle the big problems afterwards. Likewise, if one cannot deal withthe things in hand, he or she must fail in the following knotty problems. Wecan easily notice the phenomenon that the people who are in possession of thisquality finally become successful figures, such as Ma Yun, first worked as anordinary employee in a small company, and then created his own business empireafter years of sufferings。

  判断写作类型:

  Tosum up, it is imperative that we all should possess the quality of doing smallthings, and put more emphasis on the details, only through this can weundertake the responsibilities of tackling big problems。

  题干中有明显的两种观点,即先做小事,或者大事,只不过,出题人要求学生写的是关于先做小事的重要的意义,故可以使用两种观点对立的“观点分型”写作模板带入如下:

  第一段:说明现象

  第二段:观点讨论

  第三段:观点总结

  主题

  该主题,可以被分为三个部分,即:

  A:the importance of doing small things before undertaking something big

  B:doing small things

  C:  doing something big

  以上三个内容在每段中确保出现1-2次,该作文便不跑题。

  第二部分:例文写作与模板对比

  第一段:描述图片+说明现象

  As we can see from the picture,there are two persons, debating about the importance of doing small things before undertaking something big, who are a father and his son. Recently, the issue of the importance of doing small things has aroused wide concern among the public. Especially the young generation living in the big cities, they tend to do the big ones firstly, paying no attention to the fact that this behavior may pose underlying threat to their precious life and may even endanger others。

  (原有模板)

  Nowadays/recently, the phenomenon/ issue of …… has arouse wide concern among the public. Especially the young generation living in the big cities/metropolis, they tend to do sth, ignoring/paying no attention to the fact that this behavior may pose underlying threat to their precious life and may even endanger others。

  第二段:观点讨论

  Does anyone claim the same attitude towards this issue?Definitely not,actually,opinions vary from person to person.Some maintain that the doing some big is beneficial to students.However,quite a few people hold the opposite opinion that the doing some big is detrimental to the youngsters, and they think that the merits of students’ doing some small things far outweigh its demerits.To my way of thinking,we should know the the importance that why we must do small things before we undertake something big. If we know the significance,we will choice the right way and do the right things。

  (原有模板)

  Does anyone maintain/claim the same attitude towards this issue/phenomenon? Definitely not,actually/in fact,opinions vary from person to person.Some maintain/argue/hold/claim that something is beneficial to sth.However,quite a few people hold the opposite opinion that something is detrimental to sth .The demerits/disadvantages of sth. far outweigh its merits/advantages。

  第三段:观点总结

  the problem of doing big things firstly mentioned above will bound to generate severe consequences if measures should be adopted before the thing get worse.What we should do is to encourage the merits and diminish the demerits to the least extent. It is high time that all of us ,parents,educators,and the authorities, make combined efforts to let young men know the importance of doing small things before undertaking  something big .With these measures taken, it is reasonable for us to believe that this problem can be perfectly solved in the near future

  (原有模板)

  To my way of thinkingFrom my perspective, The problem mentioned above will bound to generate severe consequences if we keep turning a blind eye and deaf ear to it。

  Measures should be adopted before things get worse.What we should do is to encourage the merits and diminish the demerits to the least extent.It is high time that all of us ,parents,educators,and the authorities, make combined efforts to put an end to this situation.We should appeal to the relevant administration departments to strengthen supervision over.With these measures taken, it is reasonable for us to believe that this problem can be perfectly solved in the near future

  总结:

  改作文中,第二段落内容容易较为单薄,故建议同学们将原模板的第三段内容中,我的观点写到第二段的结尾处,已调整三段之间比例。

  最后,还是那句话,我们不押题,我们只相信自己的实力!任你出题人几路来,我只一路前行,为了自己的未来!

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