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  【题目二】A classmate of yours who has influenced you most in college。(大学中对你影响最深的一位同学)

P2:

  简单句的类型:

P1: 

  Forget ?

There are several reasons why I would argue against having compulsory community services for secondary school students. 

  【题目一】A course that has impressed you most in college. (大学中给你印象最深的一门课)

young people = teenagers 

  We often neglect to make proper use of our bodies。

I do not believe that

  【例句】一些女孩子喜欢通过购物来忘记悲伤。


  万能“亮点”句:

students' performance

  (4)申请信 资助希望工程

society has anything to gain from 

  万能“亮点”句:

On the other hand, the opportunity to do voluntary community service could be extremely positive for high school students.

  某事深深植根于某人的记忆当中。

In conclusion, teenagers may choose to work for free and help others, but in my opinion we should not make this compulsory.

  升级3:高级词汇

without being given the added responsibility 

  (4)改述陈述句:Something give somebody deep impression。

school leavers' career prospects

  加否定前缀:Dis- + remember

lead to 

  (3)隐否定陈述句:Something be unforgettable。

build their self-confidence

  (2)否定陈述句:Somebody never forget something。


  【例句】I would like to extend my warmest welcome to all of you. I am sure that this great experience visiting our university will be deeply rooted in your memory。


  升级2:熟词生意

P2 Notes:

  Something be deeply rooted in one’s memory/mind。

a period of

  例子:I am sure that this great experience participating this activity will be deeply rooted in my/your memory。

P4:

  【2014年12月真题】

P3:

  例子:I am sure that this great experience making friends with him/her will be deeply rooted in my/your memory。

oblige sb to do sth = force sb to do sth

  (2)推荐信——推荐电影

be reluctant to 

  我敢说这段美好的经历我永生难忘。

on top of 

  题目要求以学生会的名义给即将到来的外国留学生写一封欢迎信,并为他们的校园生活提出一些建议。

it would not have been impossible to add to it.

  Something be fading from one’s memory。

www.0805.com,at the same time

  【例句】We would like to extend the information that we will recruit 100 volunteers for the coming international conference on globalization on March 20,2010 in our college. I am sure that this great experience participating this activity will be deeply rooted in your memory。

P3 Notes:

  【例句】I would like to request your assistance to find a child in a remote area as the beneficiary of my financial aid. I am sure that this great experience supporting a child in poverty will be deeply rooted in my memory。

enhance their skill

  →Disremember

Some people think that all teenagers should be required to do unpaid work in their free time to help the local community. They believe this would benefit both the individual teenager and society as a whole.

  The horrible experience in my childhood is deeply rooted in my memory。


  Fade 褪色;凋谢;枯萎

compulsory = obligatory = necessary 

  主语 系语 状语 表语 主语补足语

the values of a free and fair society 

  题目要求希望参与希望工程,表达资助欲望及捐赠计划。

When young people do have some free time, we should encourage them to enjoy it with their friends or to spend it doing sports and other leisure activities. 

  (3)告示 招募志愿者

Secondly, students' performance in other subjects would be affected if valuable study time were taken by charity work or neighborhood improvement schemes. 

  双剑合璧:

extremely

  【例句】我忘记了来时的路。

P2: 

  【例句】I would like to recommend an American movie, Titanic, to you. I am sure that this great experience seeing this film will be deeply rooted in your memory。

spare time = free time

  Better choice:

Some people believe that unpaid community service should be a compulsory part of high school programmes. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

  I am sure that this great experience would be never fading from my/your memory。

They have many years of work ahead of them when they finish their studies.

  形容“记不住”,英语怎么说?

P3 Notes:

  升级1:否定反义

be beneficial for 

  我敢说这段美好的经历我永生难忘。


  I am sure that this great experience +非谓语动词作后置定语+will be deeply rooted in my/your memory and never fading from my/your mind。

P3:

  例子:I am sure that this great experience taking this course will be deeply rooted in my/your memory。

resentment  

  (1)肯定陈述句:Somebody remember something forever。

Firstly, the school curriculum is already full with important academic subjects, such as maths, science, and languages. For example, I remember having an extremely busy timetable when I was at high school, and it would not have been possible to add to it.

  Some girls are willing to go shopping to escape their sadness。

Finally, I believe that teenage students would be reluctant to take part in any programme of obligatory work, and this could lead to poor motivation and even bad behaviour.

  题目要求要为一个全球化国际会议招募志愿者。

Do you agree or disagree?

  Neglect——Neglect to do something

I would argue that

  Better Choice

force sb to do sth

  Escape 及物动词

positive

  I disremembered the way we came。

be just as demanding as 

  【题目三】A campus activity that has benefited most。(使你受益最深的一项校园活动)

poor motivation

  例如:童年时代,我有过一次永生难忘的痛苦经历。

Currently, nobody is forced to volunteer, and this is surely the best system.

  我敢说这段美好的经历将深深的植根于我的记忆当中,永远不会褪去。


  题目要求告诉老板辞职的决定,对公司提供的机会,领导的认可和同事的帮助表示感谢,对给公司造成的不便表示歉意。


  新浪教育[微博]讯 2014年12月20日全国大学英语四级考试开考,本次考试为多题多卷,新浪外语第一时间收集整理不同版本试题,供考生参考,并联系四六级名师第一时间进行真题点评,本文是文都教育王泉老师对2014年下半年写作进行的点评:

ensure 

  【例句】I do appreciate the opportunity to work here. I am sure that this great experience working in this company will be deeply rooted in my memory。

it goes against that 

  I am sure that this great experience+非谓语动词作后置定语+ will be deeply rooted in my/your memory。


  (5)辞职信

leisure activity

  运用技巧:

take part in = participate in

  (1)欢迎信—— 欢迎留学[微博]生

By making these programmes optional, schools would ensure that only motivated students took part. These students people would gain valuable experience in an adult working environment, which could help them to build their self-confidence and enhance their skills. 

  【例句】我们经常忘记了应该合理使用自己的身体。

curriculum

  题目要求给好友推荐一部自己喜欢的电影。

encourage someone to do sth or to do sth 

  【写作知识点】 形容“记忆很深刻”,英语怎么说?

academic subjects

Most young people are already under enough pressure with their studies, without being given the added responsibility of working in their spare time. School is just as demanding as a full-time job, and teachers expect their students to do homework and exam revision on top of attending lessons every day. 

P1 Notes:

as a whole


impress a university admissions officer

I would argue against

do something against their will

Many young people work on a volunteer basis, and this can only be beneficial for both the individual and society as a whole. 

However, I do not agree that we should therefore force all teenagers to do unpaid work.

In fact, I would argue that it goes against the values of a free and fair society to force a group of people to do something against their will. 

this is surely 

P4 Notes:

by making programme optional

voluntary community service

ahead of 

Similar Topic

Doing this can only lead to resentment amongst young people, who would feel that they were being used, parents, who would not want to be told how to raise their children. 

a volunteer basis = unpaid work = unpaid job


There are several reasons why

Having such experience and skills on skills on their CVs could greatly improve school leavers' career prospects. For example, a period of voluntary experience might impress a university admissions officer or a future employer.


At the same time, I do not believe that society has anything to gain from obliging young people to do unpaid work. 

P2 Notes:

might

work on

extremely busy timetable


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