【题目二】A classmate of yours who has influenced you most in college。(大学中对你影响最深的一位同学)
There are several reasons why I would argue against having compulsory community services for secondary school students.
【题目一】A course that has impressed you most in college. (大学中给你印象最深的一门课)
young people = teenagers
We often neglect to make proper use of our bodies。
I do not believe that
society has anything to gain from
On the other hand, the opportunity to do voluntary community service could be extremely positive for high school students.
In conclusion, teenagers may choose to work for free and help others, but in my opinion we should not make this compulsory.
without being given the added responsibility
(4)改述陈述句：Something give somebody deep impression。
school leavers' career prospects
加否定前缀：Dis- + remember
(3)隐否定陈述句：Something be unforgettable。
build their self-confidence
(2)否定陈述句：Somebody never forget something。
【例句】I would like to extend my warmest welcome to all of you. I am sure that this great experience visiting our university will be deeply rooted in your memory。
Something be deeply rooted in one’s memory/mind。
a period of
例子：I am sure that this great experience participating this activity will be deeply rooted in my/your memory。
例子：I am sure that this great experience making friends with him/her will be deeply rooted in my/your memory。
oblige sb to do sth = force sb to do sth
be reluctant to
on top of
it would not have been impossible to add to it.
Something be fading from one’s memory。
www.0805.com，at the same time
【例句】We would like to extend the information that we will recruit 100 volunteers for the coming international conference on globalization on March 20,2010 in our college. I am sure that this great experience participating this activity will be deeply rooted in your memory。
【例句】I would like to request your assistance to find a child in a remote area as the beneficiary of my financial aid. I am sure that this great experience supporting a child in poverty will be deeply rooted in my memory。
enhance their skill
Some people think that all teenagers should be required to do unpaid work in their free time to help the local community. They believe this would benefit both the individual teenager and society as a whole.
The horrible experience in my childhood is deeply rooted in my memory。
compulsory = obligatory = necessary
主语 系语 状语 表语 主语补足语
the values of a free and fair society
When young people do have some free time, we should encourage them to enjoy it with their friends or to spend it doing sports and other leisure activities.
Secondly, students' performance in other subjects would be affected if valuable study time were taken by charity work or neighborhood improvement schemes.
【例句】I would like to recommend an American movie, Titanic, to you. I am sure that this great experience seeing this film will be deeply rooted in your memory。
spare time = free time
Some people believe that unpaid community service should be a compulsory part of high school programmes. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
I am sure that this great experience would be never fading from my/your memory。
They have many years of work ahead of them when they finish their studies.
be beneficial for
I am sure that this great experience +非谓语动词作后置定语+will be deeply rooted in my/your memory and never fading from my/your mind。
例子：I am sure that this great experience taking this course will be deeply rooted in my/your memory。
(1)肯定陈述句：Somebody remember something forever。
Firstly, the school curriculum is already full with important academic subjects, such as maths, science, and languages. For example, I remember having an extremely busy timetable when I was at high school, and it would not have been possible to add to it.
Some girls are willing to go shopping to escape their sadness。
Finally, I believe that teenage students would be reluctant to take part in any programme of obligatory work, and this could lead to poor motivation and even bad behaviour.
Do you agree or disagree?
Neglect——Neglect to do something
I would argue that
force sb to do sth
I disremembered the way we came。
be just as demanding as
【题目三】A campus activity that has benefited most。(使你受益最深的一项校园活动)
Currently, nobody is forced to volunteer, and this is surely the best system.
【例句】I do appreciate the opportunity to work here. I am sure that this great experience working in this company will be deeply rooted in my memory。
it goes against that
I am sure that this great experience+非谓语动词作后置定语+ will be deeply rooted in my/your memory。
take part in = participate in
By making these programmes optional, schools would ensure that only motivated students took part. These students people would gain valuable experience in an adult working environment, which could help them to build their self-confidence and enhance their skills.
encourage someone to do sth or to do sth
Most young people are already under enough pressure with their studies, without being given the added responsibility of working in their spare time. School is just as demanding as a full-time job, and teachers expect their students to do homework and exam revision on top of attending lessons every day.
as a whole
impress a university admissions officer
I would argue against
do something against their will
Many young people work on a volunteer basis, and this can only be beneficial for both the individual and society as a whole.
However, I do not agree that we should therefore force all teenagers to do unpaid work.
In fact, I would argue that it goes against the values of a free and fair society to force a group of people to do something against their will.
this is surely
by making programme optional
voluntary community service
Doing this can only lead to resentment amongst young people, who would feel that they were being used, parents, who would not want to be told how to raise their children.
a volunteer basis = unpaid work = unpaid job
There are several reasons why
Having such experience and skills on skills on their CVs could greatly improve school leavers' career prospects. For example, a period of voluntary experience might impress a university admissions officer or a future employer.
At the same time, I do not believe that society has anything to gain from obliging young people to do unpaid work.
extremely busy timetable